tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2361122411710320087.post8983221348540555215..comments2014-08-03T00:04:49.828+12:00Comments on Chante : Pt England Athletics Day!!!PES Bloghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15662065130735974733noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2361122411710320087.post-51866339938625627102011-12-07T09:24:00.921+13:002011-12-07T09:24:00.921+13:00Hello Chante! I'm glad you ended up enjoying a...Hello Chante! I'm glad you ended up enjoying athletics. I was a bit like you, I used to get nervous and dread it a bit and then enjoyed it on the day! The opening sentences of your description is a good hook. Using speech instead of just telling us what happened makes it interesting. Well done.Mr Doubledaynoreply@blogger.com