Wednesday, February 8, 2012

Writing Excersise.

Today we had to write about being at the beach on a cold day, BUT we could NOT say the word cold or anything that relates to being cold!!! This excersise was called SHOW NOT TELL.

It was a cloudy day at the beach. The sky, grey as can be, was turning more dim by the minute. As soon as I put my foot in the water, shivers ran up my spine and my body was covered in goosebumps. “This was not the best day to be at the beach” I muttered to myself.

1 comment:

  1. You did it! Projected the idea without mentioning the word. Well done.

    Sadly there were too many inclement days at the beach this Summer.


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