1.Molly (my friend) and Noah (Molly’s brother) were waiting for me at the shops but I forgot a few things like my sleeping bag,pillow and my towel for Easter camp, so we had to go back home and grab all of those things, and then we had to run all the way back to the car. We waited for a while for Isra (Molly’s dad) to come and swap cars with us then we were off to a holiday programme.
2.“Hey Mollz, will I fit into the holiday programme?” I asked my friend Molly “Yeah of coarse, We’re all crazy remember” I just giggled then Emily (Molly’s Mum) told us to quickly hop out of the car and pop our things inside.
2.“Hey Mollz, will I fit into the holiday programme?” I asked my friend Molly “Yeah of coarse, We’re all crazy remember” I just giggled then Emily (Molly’s Mum) told us to quickly hop out of the car and pop our things inside.
Hi Chante,
ReplyDeleteFirst of all I'd like to say that you did an awesome job on your animation.Now for the voting. I liked your 2nd paragraph the best because it started straight away with some speech, and that always hooks me in.
Keep up the great writing!
Litia
Hi Chante,
ReplyDeleteBoth of the paragraphs were amazing but the one that I liked and the best would be the first.I loved it because you told me everyones name and it matched your movie very well.
Brooklyn
Hi Chante,
ReplyDeleteBoth of the paragraphs were amazing,but the won that I liked the most would be the first. I loved it because it matched you movie and it made senece.
Brooklyn